Wednesday, 17 June 2020

into the labrinth part 1

once there were four mates there names were methy, ethy, propy (pronounced p-row-pee), and buty (pronounced b-you-tee). one day they went into the labyrinth so they walk into the labyrinth and they start walking and see three other tunnels, left, right and forwards. ethy, the leader of the group says that right is his lucky direction so they should travel along the path so they travel along and 10 minutes later they come across a dead-end and methy says that he senses a contraption and that they should search for it. they all mass at the dead end and a trapdoor opens below them so they start falling and after a few minutes they fell on a soft floor and get up. when they got up they saw two tunnels, one tunnel had webs for some reason and there were little spiders in it. they went through the spider-webbed tunnel and came across a vast underground cavern and then noticed that it was full of spiders...

2 comments:

  1. Hi Aaron I really like your storey I thing you need capta leters

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    1. ok, I will work on that for the next one, also, spell capital as capital not capta

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