Friday, 8 May 2020

literacy





this is my literacy task for today. I liked designing this pestis of a creature that was so hardy it couldn't be

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  1. Ka mau te wehi Aaron! What an amazing descriptive paragraph, I like how you talked about the RR's hunting patterns and included a salt pouch, good thinking! How big is the RR? they must be pretty big to hunt orca but also small enough to move around in rivers?

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    1. they live in groups bigger than orca groups and can outnumber orcas 10 to 1. they also eat weaker versions of themselves because weaker ones pass one bad genes. they are mostly a nineth the size of an orca.

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  2. Hi Aaron, what an interesting creature you created. It sounds a bit like the aquatic version of a possum. If it keeps breeding and is so strong what keeps it's numbers under control? Does it have any predators? You have given this a lot of thought and used great descriptive language. Well done

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    1. the weaker rr's are eaten and they do not have a preadeter except for the occasional bands of orcas that group together to beat the rr's.

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